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Crime & Thriller Author | Novel Critic
Heena Rathore P.
Author of Deceived
Heena Rathore Pardeshi is a novelist, novel critic, as well as a book reviewer. She is also an ace social media strategist and an acclaimed YouTube Podcaster. An award-winning writer, she has won several NaNoWriMos and JuNoWriMos since 2014.
A fan of crime-thrillers, apocalyptic fiction and slasher movies and series, she draws inspiration from the works of legendary writers such as Stephen King, Dean Koontz and Sidney Sheldon.
Heena is twenty-five years old and lives in Pune, India with her beloved husband, Vishal – a successful entrepreneur, in a house full of books, music, and love. Heena passionately creates vivid fictional worlds; some to read and cherish, and some to live in.
Novel Critique Overview
Novel Critique provides an insight into your novel/manuscript. It will identify the areas in your novel that need improvement and the ones that need rewrites or revisions.
It will be provided to you in the form of a Critique Report. In this report, there'll be a chapter-by-chapter critique of all the elements listed below.
Pacing & Tension
Writing & Voice
Scenes & Chapters
View A Dummy Critique Report
Wonder how my critique report of your book will look like?
How does it work?
My work style is simple and hassle free...
Book a Critique
Book a date and make the advance payment
After receiving all the details of your manuscript/novel, I'll provide you a quote depending upon the page count and genre of your story and, once you approve it, I'll book the next available date to start working on your novel.
If you have a specific date in mind, then no worries, we can always work something out.
Let me work my magic on your manuscript and make it better
Once you make the advance payment of 50% by the decided date, I'll start working on your story.
It takes me 15-25 days to work on a manuscript/novel and prepare my Critique Report.
Please note that the timeframe depends on the length of your novel.
Receive the Report
Get the detailed Critique Report and make all the changes
After you make the payment for the remaining 50% of the fees, I'll hand over the Critique Report to you in your preferred format.
The digital report will be e-mailed to you and the physical report will be snail-mailed to you.
Please note that you'll have to bear the cost of shipping in case of the physical report.
Once you've made my suggested changes, you can request a quick revision.
After you've made the changes, I'll be happy to read the book again and provide revisions wherever necessary. Revision takes 2 weeks and is done for additional 25% of the fees.
Revision is recommended only if you've made at least 50% of the changes I suggested in my Critique Report.
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